Music video first draft

Here is our first draft to our music video 'Black and Gold'. As you watch, you'll be able to tell that this is our first draft as there are a few blank spaces and bits where continuity isn't properly constructed. Most of the green screen images are also often pixalated or blurred due to the lighting at the time of filming and because the green screen wasn't on a flat surface. Moving on from our first draft, we will have to film more to create more of a narrative during our music video, and film more camera angles/shots to add some variation. Also, at the very beginning of the video during the opening titles, we will have 'Black and Gold Sam Sparro' written in sparklers instead of the text being created on Motion 4 as it is here in the first draft. However, I feel that for a first draft this video reflects the ending image that we're trying to create and after hours of editing, I'm pleased with the work I've done so far.